Developing Narratives
A Quick Note
Welcome Back to my blog! This week we will be exploring Drawn Together by Minh Le, I Talk Like A River by Jordan Scott and Mentor Texts: Teaching Writing Through Children's Literature K-6. One text, in particular, I Talk Like A River, really resonated with me this week. It made me think about my life with more of an analytical lens. I say all this to say, reading this text brought me back to Layla’s Happiness that I highlighted in my blog a few weeks ago. Through life’s challenges and celebrations, it is truly important to remind ourselves about what makes us happy. At the end of the day, our happiness is what we hold onto and use to keep pushing through during difficult times. As a first-semester and first-year teacher and full-time graduate student I have to remind myself of this constantly. My students are my number one priority; I want each of them to know their worth, that they are loved, and that they will do great things. Covid-19 has not been easy on many of them and it is important to recognize that the mental health of children is at an all-time low. Sometimes taking a little time out of our day to do something fun that gets the kids laughing, smiling, and making jokes is more meaningful than any lesson that I could teach them. For example, I held an Among Us poetry elements game for students to participate in and they went absolutely nuts. They love trying to figure out who is the imposter and who the crewmates are. I am forever grateful for awesome resources, like GimKit, that make learning both fun and exciting for students! With that being said, let’s take a closer look at this week's readings.
I Talk Like A River
First, let’s talk about I Talk Like A River by Jordan Scott. This week I read this book as well as watched the animated movie on Epic Books. I enjoyed reading this book so much that I decided that I needed to share it with my sixth-grade scholars. My students had just finished up with our poetry unit where we talked about figurative language and compared various genres and formats of poetry. I thought that this lesson would be a great addition to what they have been learning about. I first had students view the animated movie on Epic Books and jot down any examples of figurative language that they heard the speaker say in the short film. In the short film, the speaker has a stutter to accurately read the text as it was intended to be read. All of my students listened so intently to the words that were being said. After the film finished I led a discussion with students about the figurative language examples they had found and transitioned to a discussion about theme and tone. In this specific class, most students are mature, but there are occasionally one or two students that are not quite there. One student brought up the stutter immediately. He stated that it was so hard for him to listen to a short film because of the pauses. Before I even could speak to use this moment as a learning and teaching moment one student chimed in. This student said “STUDENT NAME, think about it. If it was hard for you to listen to, how do you think it was for him to read the story out loud.” This is straight from the mouths of babes. This then led to more conversations among the students. After a thorough class discussion, we decided that acceptance is so important for many reasons. People do not choose what strengths or weaknesses they have nor can they control if they have a disability of any kind. I then felt it was appropriate to ask students the ever so famous “so what” question. Students had a variety of responses, but a few that I really liked were showing kindness to everyone no matter what and accepting people for who they are. This was such a great teaching moment for me and I am forever grateful for the inspiration that I got from this course to implement some lessons and activities into my classroom. It makes my heart so happy that I have built a classroom community in such a short amount of time that is a safe space for students to ask questions, explore unfamiliar topics, and share their writing with their peers. After this activity, I had a little class time to spare and decided to have students start working on a narrative writing piece. We used I Talk Like A River as a mentor text to start constructing narrative writing pieces. I decided to have students use the Inverted Triangle to find a Specific Writing Topic on page 65 of Mentor Texts: Teaching Writing Through Children’s Literature K-6. Below you can find my modeled example for students. I think that the inverted triangle offers a great organizational structure for students to begin thinking about what they would like to write their narratives about. Students start with a broad topic and then it gradually becomes more concise and detailed. Next week (weather permitting) I plan on utilizing Examining Details for a Good Fit on page 108 of Mentor Texts: Teaching Writing Through Children’s Literature K-6. I think that this would be a great activity and strategy to use for helping students develop their narratives and overall writing skills.
Drawn Together
This week I also read the book Drawn Together by Minh Le. I loved this powerful story that is accessible for many readers. I personally would probably not utilize this book in a whole-group fifth or sixth-grade classroom for a lesson, but I think that it will make a great addition to my classroom library for my striving readers to look through and read. Additionally, when working with striving readers in both fifth and sixth grade I think that this book would be a great small group book study. This book will be easier for students to comprehend, as it is very easy to follow and offers a lot of picture support. In my current classroom, many of my fifth-grade students are performing at approximately a third-grade level in reading fluency and a late-second grade to early third-grade level in comprehension. I think that some of my students that have language barriers would also benefit from the picture support and limited text because they are still developing strategies to become skilled readers. This specific book reminded me of a graphic novel format with the panels and splash pages throughout. One of my previous professors at ASU is a very big fan of and believer in graphic novels. In his classes, I have learned how to use this genre of text and help engage not only striving readers in reading but students who do not like reading. By using Drawn Together, a similar concept to a graphic novel, I think that it would help engage some students in their reading. When considering this specific target group of students in my classroom I would have students use the Hand Map strategy on page 70 of Mentor Texts: Teaching Writing Through Children’s Literature K-6. I think that this strategy will be accessible and engaging to meet the needs of both striving readers and students that have a negative connotation with reading and/or writing.
Exploring My Narratives
This week I have been working on constructing my own narratives. Writing has not always been something that I have been extremely confident in, as it was not emphasized when I was in elementary and middle school. Now that I am teaching fifth and sixth grade and am seeing first-hand how the lack of emphasis on writing has impacted students' ability to express themselves, I have made it a personal mission to teach these students basic writing skills to help prepare them for middle school. With that being said, one narrative that I have really been focusing on is about getting sent to school my senior year of high school in a snowstorm and being dismissed from school during our first-period class, and having to drive home on ice and snow as an inexperienced driver. It was quite an adventure to say the least. When I selected this topic, I utilized the Hand Map strategy on page 70 of Mentor Texts: Teaching Writing Through Children’s Literature K-6. This strategy is a great strategy to help writers think about different emotions and events that have happened in their lives where they have experienced those emotions. I then added to this narrative by using the Examining Details for A Good Fit strategy on page 108 to add details to my narrative in the beginning, middle, and end. I have included a picture of my narrative below. However, it is still a work in progress. When really thinking about it, all writing is a work in progress because it can always be revised or edited depending on the situation.
A Final Note
As this blog post comes to a close, I challenge you to think about how to get students engaged in writing during hybrid instruction- I am always looking for recommendations!
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Until next week!
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Ms. Parsels :)
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